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as i said to @Halo on my profile wall, i would like some suggestions and notes on how to write an epic loli story, this is what i have so far

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>20 years old
>after a year of HIKI & NEETdom im finally decide to go outside.
>parents gave my brother a choice either he had to get a job or go back to school.
>My parents planned for this weekend to be a seminal event in my brothers life, little did they know it would be monumental for me, yet for entirely different reasons.
>before the sun rises im woken up "anon its time to visit Uni, you and Echo can sleep on the way there."
>the hand of my older brother guides me out of bed, as my eyes adjust he hands me Echo who shifts her weight into my chest. as i lumber forward he nudges me towards the SUV
>still half asleep i slump into the car Echo held as tight as a security blanket and fall back asleep to the rhythm of the road.
>to my shock i awake as my little sister pokes at my face. "anon are you gonna leave us?" Echo asks as she anxiously wiggles her lower half.
>A few beams of light hit Echos face and as i brushed her hair out of the way i was struck by an overwhelmingly sweet smell which i couldn't yet place. as i reached for the seatbelt i realized Echo was lying on it so i picked her up by the waist and couldnt help but notice her baby fat melt between my fingers.
>as i struggle with the seat belt buckle for what seems like an eternity Echo grabs my hand as i give up and place my head on Echos lap.
>in a fog of delirium i feel the car pull to the side "ok anon, we'll be in the city soon now, so buckle her up please and we'll meet at Uni?" the parental figure asks, little did i know this would sow the seeds of fate.
>as they pull ahead of me i remained helpless as the car was split and tottalled killing my parents. this left me my little sister Echo and my brother orphaned.
>as we arrive home from the funeral Echo clamps down on my arm, the heat of her body forces me to take off my jacket which i place over Echo as she squirms i ask Echo what she wants and im greeted with a deep soft kiss followed by "anon please dont leave me."
>as i put recent the events out of my mind, i hear the pitter patter of tiny feet as they move about, as i check the guest door Echo sneaks in via the bathroom and approaches my bed her head at my feet as she climbed me.
>Echo sheepishly pawed at me as if playing tag, on instinct i jumped up yet echo continued with a kiss which sent shockwaves through my entire being, this brought Echo and i face to face her sullen gaze momentarily broken as Echo persed her lips only to attempt a sloppy immature French kiss. Echo and i continued to console one another into the wee hours, precisely the kind of hours where one wonders "what can i get away with?" my eyes scan her tiny body and notice Echos butt crack is exposed as she lies unconscious, so i press myself firmly against Echos back and allow myself to drift off back to dreamland.
>amidst my slumber i dream of the previous night, as i catch up to current events my crotch feels warm and wet, that's when i awoke to find Echos mouth wrapped around my dick as she played with my balls her immature yet firm grip sent shivers of ecstasy up my spine, as i fought not to cum i felt her tiny tongue wrap around the head of my dick and finally couldnt take it anymore "im gonna." i managed to blurt out as i came. when she finished Echo jumped and headed over to the shower "what, were done already?" i asked, Echo rolled her eyes seemingly annoyed "i have to get ready for soccer."

>in anticipation of my little sister Echo coming home i decided to meet her halfway from where she was practicing Soccer, as i let my mind wander on thoughts of what she was wearing even how it fit her and how the sweat dripped off her short hair onto her neck down onto her immature budding loli breasts adding a tinge of salt to the sweet loli body before i knew it i found myself in front of Echo and her friends as they toweled off when i saw the gaggle of schoolgirls i knew i had to smell them or id never forgive myself so i ran up to my sister and gave her a hug as all the girls said "uh, she's sweaty and stinky" as i thought "i know" i lifted Echo up as i hid my boner Echo kissed my chest
>as Echo leaned into my chest her friends started to smirk and giggle at first which quickly gave way to derisive laughter, just as my hands loosened their grip around Echos waist i felt her pull me tighter those girlish giggles turned into stunned silence my sister presented her flat sweaty chest lifted her shirt for me to lick her sweaty flat chest which i did and it tasted better than my wildest dreams and i savored the flavor of her tight loli body.

>echo sat with her friends behind a short set of bleachers when i pulled into the parking space. when i approached to help her carry her bag, she jumped up and held me tightly, her uniform was damp underneath my hands, her short hair stuck to her sweaty forehead and mine, her saliva tasted like the vitamin water i packed in her bag, with traces of salt. for her sake, i broke off the kiss before her friends could take a more vivid mental note, her vocalizations peaking in volume shortly after our lips separated. i said goodbye to the group, threw her bag over my shoulder and walked towards the parked car with echo.
 
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>in anticipation of my little sister Echo coming home i decided to meet her halfway from where she was practicing Soccer, as i let my mind wander on thoughts of what she was wearing even how it fit her and how the sweat dripped off her short hair onto her neck down onto her immature budding loli breasts adding a tinge of salt to the sweet loli body before i knew it i found myself in front of Echo and her friends as they toweled off when i saw the gaggle of schoolgirls i knew i had to smell them or id never forgive myself so i ran up to my sister and gave her a hug as all the girls said "uh, she's sweaty and stinky" as i thought "i know" i lifted Echo up as i hid my boner Echo kissed my chest.

>as Echo leaned into my chest her friends started to smirk and giggle at first which quickly gave way to derisive laughter, just as my hands loosened their grip around Echos waist i felt her pull me tighter those girlish giggles turned into stunned silence my sister presented her flat sweaty chest lifted her shirt for me to lick her sweaty flat chest which i did and it tasted better than my wildest dreams and i savored the flavor of her tight loli body.

>echo sat with her friends behind a short set of bleachers when i pulled into the parking space. when i approached to help her carry her bag, she jumped up and held me tightly, her uniform was damp underneath my hands, her short hair stuck to her sweaty forehead and mine, her saliva tasted like the vitamin water i packed in her bag, with traces of salt. for her sake, i broke off the kiss before her friends could take a more vivid mental note, her vocalizations peaking in volume shortly after our lips separated. i said goodbye to the group, threw her bag over my shoulder and walked towards the parked car with echo.

>the sight of Echos horrified expression as she gazed upon the vehicle brought with it a flood of memories and led me to chastise myself for being so absent-minded, yet to my surprise echo did not break her stride nor look away, instead echo gripped my hand while she led me to the front seat of the car where she wiggled her butt onto hapharzardly throws a seatbelt over her shoulder which gave me the opportunity to fix it i made sure my hand firmly brushed against her immature budding breast as i fixed her seatbelt, i even went so far as to reach between echos leg (one hand on her thigh one on her foot) to adjust the seat all the while echo had her head thrown back as if to shake the past out i notice echo smiles and plays with the radio shuffling between stations.
 
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<As i make my way over to the drivers side of the car i over hear sweet soft loli moans coming from Echo who rapidly shifted in her seat as she fixed her shorts i saw juices drip down her leg, As i sat down Echo stared at me a smile plastered across her face as she reached her hand between her legs she collected some of her wetness and brought the hand up to my lips which i savored to no end. "Now that i got you something to eat, will you return the favor?" Echo said.
Now of course in my over sexed mind i think this means she wants to blow me right now, so i reach into my pants to fish my dick out when Echo giggles "oh, we can do that too, but after cause im legit hungry right now." Echo replied momentarily squashing my dreams and hopes "Gotcha." i respond as i re buckle my belt and pull over to get her a burger.
 
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