Aragae! Dark Elf-Chan - Chapter 2

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Elf-chan is incredibly cute, by the way.

Vajra

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Here's Chapter 2 of Dark Elf-Chan. We decided to continue our translation as it serves as a learning experience for both Ene and I. Plus you get to see more of Ene's interpretation; his translation work is great.



You'll notice right away that I started using different fonts for both dialogue and SFX, depending on the context. It makes each page look less dull overall. Of course, though, since I'm still relatively new to typesetting manga, please point out any mistakes I've made and/or give suggestions if you have any. :flan-yea:

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Ene

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Good job :nana-thumb:
You should add Proofreading: Vajra to the credits
I'll start translating chapter 3
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@/Everyone, please comment if you have any thoughts on the translation.
 
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Narbray

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this manga is quite funny, I would like to see it animated.
I think the translation is quite good, it was easy to understand even for someone who does not have a good command of english like me
and the translation is quite comfortable, it doesn't deteriorate the natural flow of the dialogues so the dialogues feel quite natural for a translation, if you know what I mean.
is this manga weekly? unfortunately has very few pages, although it may be better for this story
 

salty_apollyon

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Here's Chapter 2 of Dark Elf-Chan. We decided to continue our translation as it serves as a learning experience for both Ene and I. Plus you get to see more of Ene's interpretation; his translation work is great.
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this right here, this fucking pannel m8.
amazing job now im having a hearth attack
 
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